Crying Rain

Crying, For all these hard times. Screaming, At this wall of memories. Falling, From the cliff of your existence. We’re lost in a sea, Of indecisive love. Crying: That’s what ...

stars- yeah, you're completely right :) shanan- that is why I didn't say what it was. I just wanted to see if anyone could figure it out. Thanks for your ...

This is really sad and has a great and strong meaning to it. You did really good with this poem. The one thing that bugs me a bit is: "It ...

Hi there Ok, honestly I found this to be really great. It was a really nice poem. I little rough in the middle of it, but other than that, I ...

Hi there, I like this a lot, but I think it was kinda rough. It didn't flow too great for me and so it was slightly hard to read. I ...

Cold tears fall, Staining her shirt. Screams escape. She can't yell loud enough. A swollen heart. Pain ripping at her chest. Ready to die. Nails dig deep. Piercing the skin. ...

Everyday I break More and more. My eyes are empty yet full of love. My ears want to bleed because they can't hear you. My lips are yearning to kiss ...

You keep telling me That you want to forget The pain. So why not Give it a try? You say that It's easier said Than done. But you never tried. ...

Hello there, kitty. Well...I got to maybe...the 15th line and I had to stop myself. Let me just point out a few things. One, the length is just terrible. Something ...

Hey there. First of all: I'd like to point out that you should really use punctuation and capitalize your beginnings of your sentences. It just makes it look nicer. Second ...